Dialogue should be readable, it should engage the reader and make them care enough to read more. This is interesting. Dialogue should be different. It should be more than just a conversation that you would have in the street, you know, with a mate. Dialogue should serve to move the story forward. In some circumstances, it is the story.
Do you want to hear the words like you're standing at a bus stop? (See the last dialogue post)
Do you want to hear the words like you're standing at a bus stop next to Morgan Freeman, Michael Caine, or maybe Liam Neeson.
|Dialogue Makers: Don't you wish you were sitting at that table?|
This is good dialogue.
So anyway. See inane rant.
And I'll leave you will this: